“Is it over?” She asks.
“It’s over thanks to you, now rest up, you’ll be okay,” he says as he runs a hand through her blood soaked hair, she laughs softly.
“You still haven’t got this lying thing down yet, your eyes give it away,” she says, closing her eyes.
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Death is not an easy thing to practice
When two people are close, and they know each other, inside out and out, lies are almost impossible to hide… But death, death is something someone should never have to lie about.
He seems to be very powerful here..emotionally powerful.
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