“And, well, next thing I know, she’s missing a chunk of flesh from her throat, and convulsing on the ground in front of me, choking on her own blood.”

“So what, you just stood back and watched while this happened?”

“I had no choice, I was holding the fucking thing.”

 

Keep an eye out for the 50 Word Story Extended version, or, if you’re feeling game, try to extend it yourself…..

 

 

Comments

6 responses to “Day 164 – Boxindul – 50 Word Story”

  1. Magechild Avatar

    Gruesome but morbidly amusing… Impressive!

    1. Matthew Tonks Avatar

      Thanks so much 🙂

  2. sinisterdarksoul Avatar

    Nice! I love how this story goes right for the throat (yes I’m aware of what I did there) so to speak. I love the imagery in your stories, both the 50 word ones and the extended pieces.

    I still think it is like watching a brief movie trailer lol. I love that!

    Cheers! 🙂

    1. Matthew Tonks Avatar

      Thanks so much, I try to bring you something different, yet the same, with each 50 Word Story and their Expanded version, sometimes, the separation is vast, and other times, well, it’s a bloody mess 👍

      1. sinisterdarksoul Avatar

        A fun bloody mess. 😉

      2. Matthew Tonks Avatar

        Haha, indeed, my favourite kind 😜

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