MATTHEW TONKS Australian Horror Author

When she next opens her eyes there is no pain, she look s around the room, they stand there, watching her from the shadows, a tall, naked man stands in front of her, he smiles, holding out a hand to help her to her feet.

“Welcome, my love,” he says.

 

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3 responses to “Day 179 – Cold Cup – 50 Word Story”

  1. finnegandaley Avatar

    This one’s intriguing. One suggestion for sending it off in an energetic direction is to replace the “man” in “tall, naked man” with something less pedestrian. Such as…hunchback. Scientist. Strongman. Mummy. Tourist. Mendicant.

    1. Matthew Tonks Avatar

      I wanted to write more with this one, I have an idea, maybe something will happen with it soon, there are ideas in the works 👍

      1. finnegandaley Avatar

        Looking forward to it!

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