His laugh, his demented fucking laugh, irritated the hell out of me. I screamed for him to do it, to finish the job, but that wasn’t what he wanted. The next thing I knew, my world turned to black as I felt his boot hit the side of my head.

 

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4 responses to “Day 180 – Hallows Tales – 50 Word Story”

  1. finnegandaley Avatar

    Serves as an excellent opening line, as well as a story in its own right.

    1. Matthew Tonks Avatar

      Thanks I had an idea, a large, insane, deeply dark idea, so I’m having fun with it. Thanks for enjoying 👍

      1. finnegandaley Avatar

        You are replete with these dark ideas. They make for awesome bite-sized nuggets of entertainment. I can’t wait until you bring them all together!! That would be a real page turner.

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