The darkness,
is ripping at me,
clawing at me,
dragging me in,
taking my sin,
my life’s no longer mine,
can’t you hear me crying,
oh please,
why won’t you let me die,
oh please,
why won’t you let me die,
the darkness,
is circling me,
tearing at me,
keeping me in,
stripping my sin,
my life was never mine,
GOD,
can’t you hear me crying,
oh please,
why won’t you let me die,
oh please,
why won’t you let me die.
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Wow… speechless here…
Thanks so much, I’m glad you enjoying it.
This one was wow. Can feel the desperation. Tempting me to give it a go… Should I??
My god yes, if you feel it, do it! I’d love to see you smash something like this 👍
Lol. Don’t say you weren’t warned!
Ok so it’s coming in a bit late, but it was never out of my mind. Thanks a ton for helping me break my block.
Wow, that was amazing, brilliantly written, I felt so much, as a human, more as a father. Well done, writers block my arse, there’s no blocks there 👍 You we’re looking for inspiration was all.
I know exactly what you mean. As individuals we can tolerate a whole lot of rubbish, but as parents it’s just not possible to ignore. I have had too many thoughts in my head and no time to write. Your story prompted me to pick up the pen despite it all 😊
The time you spent was worth it, amazing!
Aww thanks 🙂
When I’m near my computer I’ll reblog it 👍
Oh, that would be wonderful. Awareness is desperately needed.
Dark and hypnotic! You really should submit a poem to SMM. We’ll post your newest story next week.
Thanks 👍 I might just do that, I’m having fun with them at the moment, so be on the look out 😀 Cool, I’ll make sure I link it up over here when you do.
Done and done, it’s in the email slot 👍
Terrific! I’ll check it out.
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