Day 186 – Lamentation – Where I Start

“I crawled from the pit, my body, broken, bloody, and all I could think of is what I’d do to you, once I found you,” he says, through bloody, clenched teeth.

“I bet you didn’t think this was how it was going to go?” She says as she grabs the handle of the blade that sticks from his chest, and twists it, he screams in pain.

 

You can view the final version HERE.

OR

You can also, finish it off yourself, the only rule, this has to be the start, the words can be changed, it can be twisted, a little, but, it still needs to fundamentally be the same beginning.

 

2 responses to “Day 186 – Lamentation – Where I Start”

  1. […] Note: Nag means Cobra in Hindi. Written in response to the In The Style Of challenge. Inspired by the works of Matthew Tonks, and expanding upon the start of LAMENTATION. […]

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    1. I totally enjoyed that variation on the story, brilliant, and well worth sharing on my blog.

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