“I said give me you’re fucking bag, or, I’ll cut you!”He says, griping tightly onto the blades handle, holding it towards the two women.
“Please, pl…” She doesn’t get to finish her words as he thrust the knife forward, digging the blade into her stomach, she drop’s to her knees, her eyes wide with shock, she gasps for air, as the other woman begins screaming, then, he grabs the bag from her and knocks her to the ground, as the shadows themselves comes alive, and a figure appears.
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You can also, finish it off yourself, the only rule, this has to be the start, the words can be changed, it can be twisted, a little, but, it still needs to fundamentally be the same beginning.


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