“It wasn’t always like this, I-I-I, I knew if I could just make this work, it’d fix everything I’d done wrong, and, maybe then, she’d forgive me,” he says, staring at the dark, red, sticky, wet, blood, as it drips from his hands.
“Maybe, your first mistake was killing her.”
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I am really impressed along with your writing abilities
as well as with the format in your blog. Is that this a
paid topic or did you customize it your self? Either way keep up the nice quality writing, it’s rare to look a great blog like this one today..
Yeah, maybe killing her is the end…or maybe it isn’t? 😉
Maybe killing her was just a stupid move.. but, certainly not the end.
You know what they say…you only get one chance to make a good first impression…bwahahaha
Very true, you stuff that up and more often than not, its hard to come back from there.
Intriguing!
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