He sits on the bland, uncomfortable cot, his fingers move, as if he’s playing an invisible piano. Then, he stops, and Marty slowly turns, his eyes, sewn shut, his mouth scarred, torn, from cheek to cheek. “We didn’t stop it, the bea….!” The prison door slams shut, cutting him off.
Day 173 – A Glimpse, Into Tomorrow – 50 Word Story
9 responses to “Day 173 – A Glimpse, Into Tomorrow – 50 Word Story”
-
[…] Day 173 – A Glimpse, Into Tomorrow – 50 Word Story […]
-
Another wonderful story! ^_^
-
Thanks so much, it’s an ending as well as a beginning, the expanded version will wait another day, I think it’s more of an end credits sort of thing 👍
-
I love that! ^_^ It seems it, but you just never know with these 50 word stories. At least until you expand them. 🙂
-
The fun of it all, I really don’t know what form everything will take come the 13th, when month six begins, normally I find something new to try, but I like the 50 words and expanding them, so, I think they’ll stay, but the youchallenges, they are going to disappear I think.
-
That’s half the fun of writing in general. Experimentation, seeing where things take you and also throwing out what you don’t like. The beauty of it is you can always create something new and quite often it will be something you never even saw coming…all starting from a simple idea. 🙂
Writing is awesome and I look forward to seeing what happens as you enter the new month and try new things. Keep up the amazing work! ^_^
-
-
You know what works better then thread?
Super Glue
From Your Friend The Mortician
Anita Marie
-
The thread, is much more fun to rip through, where glue, is more, permanent 👍
-
You thought that through, I mean the sounds…wow!
-
Leave a Reply to sinisterdarksoulCancel reply