Day 210 – The Season – Where I Start

She grips herself tightly, as a cold shiver runs down her back, and into her groin.

“Why’s it so damn cold,” she says, through clenched teeth, her breathe like a puff of smoke fades off into the night sky.

He laughs, “Because it’s winter, that’s what it does, it gets cold.”

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  1. Jenn Moss says:

    I read the extended version of this first (that’s what came up first in my reader.) It’s fun to see the small part you started with!

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    1. It has a completely different feel, I thought, when I was writing it, how can I make this something more than what it seems

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