She grips herself tightly, as a cold shiver runs down her back, and into her groin.
“Why’s it so damn cold,” she says, through clenched teeth, her breathe like a puff of smoke fades off into the night sky.
He laughs, “Because it’s winter, that’s what it does, it gets cold.”
A Journey Through Photography
Original Writing Inspired by Poe, King, and Twilight Zone, namely Horror, Fantasy, Paranormal, Nonfiction, and Poetry
a little bit smutty
poems & paragraphs
A journey through dark art.
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Deep Thoughts and Ideas
'Journey to a place, where all his nightmares, become your reality...'
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structure bits
I am using this site to post very rough drafts of my short stories, flash fiction, and books. I hope you enjoy them but I also hope you take the time to give feedback on what needs improvement. Please feel free to be critical but not mean. All the help anyone could offer would mean the world to me so feel free to comment what you like, dislike, additional ideas, something you'd like to see in the story. Who knows if I ever get published I'll mention you in blurb at the beginning thanking everyone who helped me along the way. Thanks!
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I read the extended version of this first (that’s what came up first in my reader.) It’s fun to see the small part you started with!
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It has a completely different feel, I thought, when I was writing it, how can I make this something more than what it seems
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