“Ain’t no letting go of ya girl, ya here ta stay now, been hunting ya for ta long, ta just let ya go,” the old woman says as she digs the knife into the girls forehead, and slowly begins slicing it across her face, the girl screams out in agony.
This 50 word story was originally published in issue 287 of Fear In Fear Magazine under the name Bang Goes The Drum, and posted here on the 26th of September under the name Paid, the short was expanded upon the same day, to read the expanded version, you can go HERE.
You’re more than welcome, as always if inspiration hits, to expand the story yourself, all I ask is that you post a link in the comments below so I can showcase it on the blog.


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