“When I stepped through the gate, and I crossed the border into this world, I knew that the killings would stop. But, but I didn’t think, I didn’t expect, that it would be…” He looks up at the shape, hiding in the shadows.
“You didn’t expect it to be you?”
You can read the expanded version HERE and, as a rare bonus, you can read Jac Forsyth’s fantastic tale based around this short, over HERE.
Border is today’s Daily Prompt
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The killings stopped because the killer stepped into another world. Well done.
That’s so brilliant. I have so many stories jumping around in my head. Post the extended version soon.
Haha, I have to write it first, but I’ve got ideas, it will be interesting to see which one becomes.
Maybe you should write one of them down, expand your own version 👍
Haha, okay. Let’s do this.
Haha, I look forward to see where it takes you 👍
So I’m gonna credit you and put a link to the original blog if that’s okay?
I’ll put a link from the original to your extended version as well 👍
See you on the other side 😱
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