50 Word Story Expanded
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He steps out into the night air and takes a deep, long drag on his cigarette, playfully blowing the smoke into rings as he lets the breath out, some people can smoke for their whole life and never master the technique, so he always proudly likes to display the skill that took him many countless…
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“Run little man!” A voice yells from out of the darkness. “Run, but you won’t escape, I’ll find you and gut you like the pig you are!” He feels the pain rip into his lungs, burning his throat, as he pushes himself forward, faster, harder, his stomach twists and turns, agony rips through him, sweat…
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“What? No, I won’t be long, I’ve just got to do one last thing, and then we can go. I love you too,” he says as he hangs up the phone. He looks out of the car window, biting into his bottom lip, staring at the rusted gates that lead into Pine Crest Cemetery. He…
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“I knew it was wrong,” he says, looking at his blood stained shoes. “But, the fucker deserved it.” “Really? Tell me,” she says, he looks up, into her eyes, and swallows. “He was a jerk, he wouldn’t let me in, he was big noting himself to all the girl, thought he was something special. But…
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“A fragile heart, is an easy thing to break. I give you fair warning, it won’t be as simple as you think to win him over.” “I’m well aware there’s more than one way to a man’s heart, not just through his rib cage,” she says with an evil smile. He grabs her, and they…
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“Just keep going north, I can’t go with you,” he says, she smiles faintly, and grips her arm, tearing at it nervously as she bits into her bottom lip. He cups her chin with a hand and raises her eyes to his. “You’ll be fine, trust me, I’m dead anyway.” “No your not, we can…
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“It’s easy Simon, you just put the fucking knife to her throat and you slice it across. It’s that fucking simple, you know how it works!” Simon looks down at the girl who’s hair he tightly grips in one hand, to the knife in the other, and then, up at him “But, she’s done nothing…
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“It’s entiely possible, I mean, at this stage, anything is,” she says, running her hand down the frame of the mirror. “At this stage? We’re not in one of your supernatural horror movies Shelley, this is the real world, shit like this just doesn’t happen.” She turns to him and smiles, “Why is it suddenly,…
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He drops to his knees and screams out in anger, clenching his hands into fists, and slamming them into the ground. “I’ll fucking kill you Drake!” He yells, as tears run down his face, he looks up, into Drake’s eyes, anger burns within him, and Drake smiles. “No you won’t,” Drake says as he steps…
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Another day, and more inspiration, Yazgar posted another awesome image last night for Inktober and Drawlloween, and, while I was sitting down to write tonight’s YouChallenge story, this happened. So you can pop over to HERE to view the picture, that inspired the following story. And I should also add, congratulations as well, as its…
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“They say he can’t be killed,” she says as she opens the box, light reflects off the blade and shines onto her face, her eyes glisten in the light, she smiles wickedly as she grips the handle and lifts it out. “But you’re going to tell me that’s untrue, right?” “I’m going to tell you…
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“Now, can you tell the detective what you told me ma’am,” the officer says. She looks over to the detective, and clears her throat, “Like I said, it was about fifteen minutes before I heard her scream, and there was this guy, dancing on her balcony, all graceful and shit.” “Dancing?” “Yeah, like he was…
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“I don’t know, should we really be down here?” “Don’t tell me your scared?” “What? Who, me? No way, I’m just saying, do we really need to be part of the Delta Chi’s?” “Of course we do, if we aren’t part of a sorority we won’t get accepted. Anyway, you’re the one who talked me into…
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“It’s not fucking rocket science Timmy, you either play ball, or we find someone else who’ll do the job. This fucker needs to be found and put in the ground. So either you’re in, or out, which one is it?” “It’s not as simple..” He doesn’t get to finish what he’s saying as something sharp…
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“I’m sorry my ladyship, but, he won’t eat, he flat our refuses to touch any of the food, not until you see him,” the large man says, she places a hand on his arm. “It’s okay, I should’ve been here earlier. I feel terrible, please, leave us, I will convince him to eat,” she says.…
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“Please, please, let me go!” She screams as the old woman comes towards her, she slowly runs her hands through her hair and smiles, before taking a big handful of hair and pulling the girls head to the side, running the blade of a knife along the side of her face. “Ain’t no letting go…
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“Here,” he says holding out a fifty dollar note towards him, the mans eyes light up. He leans forward, confusion, excitement and fear all run across his face in matter of seconds, he nervously reaches out a hand. His eyes dart from the note, to the strangers face, and then, back to the crisp fifty dollar…
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“It starts like all things, with a spark, one that grows, and grows, until finally it consumes everything, becoming more than just a part of you, it is you, and, you can’t hold back, you don’t want to. You thrive, you survive, and that, my dear friend, is my answer.” “But it doesn’t really answer…
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“I’m not stupid, fucktard! I know how it works, just give it to me!” he says, grabbing the golden goblet from her and greedily swallowing it’s contents. “Okay, but I needed to make sure you understood that asking the devil for a favour is not as simple as it sounded.” He wipes the liquid from…
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“Thanks for coming so quickly, I know this is the last place…” “Shut up Damon, I’m here, like you asked, now, what the fuck do you want,” she says as she throws her bag to the ground and tumbles into the seat opposite him. “I-I-I..” “You what?” her eyes burn at him like hot daggers,…