That Kiss – 100 Word Microfiction Short Story

I entered a short story competition that required me to write a 100 word short story in 24 hours. The story needed to meet three things, a theme (Comedy), a situation (Climbing a Mountain) and a word that needed to be used (Radar). It took me a while to find the right idea, and get it to work in a way I was happy with, but that’s not saying I didn’t enjoy the process,  and the stories that didn’t make the cut. So, for the sake of creativity, here is the rejected 100 word stories I wrote..


That Kiss

“You do realise, that when this is all over we both won’t ever want to see each other again,” Donna says as she wipes a fresh tear from her check.
“You don’t need to tell me twice, I’m in total agreeance there.” Butch says as he stares up towards the mountains summit.
“I’m pretty sure a radar could see this one not working out.”
“I thought maybe we’d at least kiss once before it was all over.”
Butch laughs softly, before loosening his belt, “How about you suck my cock for a while, and I’ll think about that kiss?”

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